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by EILEEN. Wednesday, November 15, 2006

 

 
   

Let the setting be an old desert with people living in there. Pueblos sprouting from the ground like flowers of spring, but yet, not as colorful. Let the characters rise from our imaginations. One by the name of, let's say, Eva. The other, by the name of Laura, just a year younger. See, these two girls have been friends since grade school. They don't know much about each other, but they understand each other's thoughts. Here, it's a hot summer's day where sand paths are to be worn away by the bustling people in the small green farmer's market. Though our two little friends don't live here, they are here for a quick stay. Let the journey begin!

"Eva! You up for some tennis?" Laura shouts just as she passes her very good friend on the street

"Sure, what harm would there be?" she then answers taking the racket that Laura has offered her.

So, they immediately started playing right then and there. Since there were no courts in this impoverished desert land, they hit the ball so it bounces off the walls of the houses and back down to which they ran and hit the ball again. Then, however, they reached a section of this relatively small town where there were dark alleys around every corner. But they didn't see it, it was no less the same as the others.

One of the girls hit the ball too hard and it bounced into one of the many alleys. Eva, as the older one, takes the responsibility and goes to get the ball back. While doing so, she one of the houses caught her attention. You see, they don't have doors on their houses since it's set in a desert. Eva is then lured into the house and didn't come back out. Laura was paying no such attention what so ever, but then, Eva's sudden scream awakened whatever that was still sleeping. Laura froze, What happened? Eva?

Just then, a man in a tropical green shirt came out of the same ally she saw Eva go into and ran away. Laura had no TIME to think! She ran directly to the nearest stall of the farmer's market and blurted out, "Someone's in danger! Call the police!" Eva regretted that she didn't help her friend, and just went calling people out one by one to get the cops. There was this one stall in which two people laughed as she said so.

"You little kids are so ignorant," one woman said another.

"Yes, you're right. She or he MAY be in danger, but what difference does that make? One less person, one less to feed!" The other lady laughed.

"What do you mean?" Asked Laura out of breath.

"This place was never meant for the living anyways. So what if one gets lost" They continued talking.

"HAVE OTHER PEOPLE BEEN DISAPPEARING TOO?" Too scared to imagine what could've happened, she ran to the next stall where she talked to an old toad and a talking snake.

The minute she realized it on the other hand, she felt really stupid. What am I doing? I think the heat's getting to me. Now wondering if she'll ever help her friend, if there's even police around at ALL, she dragged her tired feet along the dry yellow sand ground.

To be continued...

 
 
 
   
   

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