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Nalia, Chpater 1


by HANNAH. Saturday, December 18, 2004

 

 
   

Nalia shivered in the night air as she ran, splashing through the muddy streets of Malch. Rain poured down on her, soaking through her thin jacket. It was dark; the rain had put out all the torches, leaving only a waning moon to light her path. Turning back more to listen than to look, she no longer heard the footsteps of her father chasing her. She stopped and started to sob. Her whole life was now ruined! She had run out of her house with her father yelling at her, not too far behind. She could still hear her mother's cries and her father's cursing in her head. She shook her head violently, trying to get the sounds and images out of her head. Sobbing, Nalia stumbled as she tried to find shelter from the rain. She was only 13 and her father already wanted her to be married off. Nalia quickly ran underneath the shelter of a tree and sat, huddled there, wondering where to go now.

A slow ploop, ploop, ploop sound woke Nalia up. It was still dark, but at the edge of the sky, Nalia could see just a tiny bit of glowing from the rising sun. She looked around wondering what had woken her up. Ploop. A drop of water fell on her nose. The rain had stopped and water, now, was dripping from the trees. As Nalia stood up, she could hear the city waking up with her. A few roosters were crowing, shopkeepers were opening up their shops, beggars were already claiming street corners, and merchants with their horse-drawn carriages were searching for places to set up. Turning quickly, to get away from the main streets, Nalia stumbled into a young man walking by. " Oh, sorry." Nalia muttered and walked quickly away. She sprinted off through the city gates, leaving the young man staring at where she had stood.

"Now where do I go?" Nalia sighed as she strolled across the bridge, "Father must have his men looking for me." Stopping at the middle to stare into the water, Nalia gazed at her reflection. "I look like a beggar!" Nalia laughed out loud. Relaxing a little bit, she continued across the bridge. As she walked past a tree, Nalia thought she heard footsteps behind her. She whipped around and stood ready to sock whoever was behind her, but no one was there. Getting a little nervous, she picked up her pace, trying to find an open area. She still had the feeling she was being followed.

Nalia finally came upon a clearing. She walked straight through it. When she was about to head into the trees again she swerved around quickly. There was the young man she had bumped into earlier, just about to run into the trees. The two just froze there as sunlight began to pour in between the treetops. Suddenly, Nalia turned on the balls of her feet and broke into a run through the trees.

"Wait! Don't go!" The young man cried as he sprinted after her. "It looks like you might need some help." He continued, catching her arm as he caught up.

"Well, I don't! And you best leave me alone if you know what's good for you." She turned away and continued running to nowhere in particular.

Suddenly, she ran into someone else.

"Leave me ALONE!" Nalia yelled, not knowing who it was. Nalia just turned away and continued walking. Then there was another person and another and another. Her father's men surrounded her. Panicking, Nalia blindly fled right into the arms of one of the men. "Let me go!" She yelled, kicking at her captor. The arms around her tightened as she was dragged back toward the other men. Suddenly, the grip around her loosened and her captor fell to the ground. In his back stood a dagger deep into his body. Sickened by the sight, Nalia could not move. She could hear yells in back of her, as she struggled to reach a tree nearby. She turned around to see why the other men hadn't come after her and saw the young man. He was fighting all of the men, and winning.

 
 
 
   
   

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Hannah who??? Hannah YIU!!!

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