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A Mildly Grim Vignette To Warm the Soul


by CAT. Wednesday, May 5, 2004

 

 
   

A basement.

The syncopated rhythm of shoes on concrete steps is audible, but unheard by the woman, who is humming. She jauntily slips the noose over her head. She tugs a little on the rope above her, peers up at the pipe it is tied to.

At this moment, a young man enters the room. His shoes, buttered with shoeshine, glint dustily from the bare light-bulb on the ceiling. He blinks. The woman is somewhat embarrassed. She stares at him, and he stares at her.

“Hello, mother.” A pause. “Hello,” the woman says. “What are you doing?” The son is answered with the shifting eyes of the woman. Then, “Baking a cake,” says the woman. This is met with a particularly empty silence. “Oh,” he says. “Do you need any help?” The young man swallows, looks around. “No,” she answers after a brief silence. “Thank you, though.” “All right,” says her son.

They stare.

The sound of a kettle’s whistle enters the basement.

“I think that I hear my tea kettle,” says the woman, and looks at the young man. He nods, and she moves past him, up the stairs. He listens to the syncopated clacking of stair climbing. He stands there, at the base of the stair, and listens to the sharp commingling of dishes. He clears his throat.

She descends the stairs, the woman, again with the familiar syncopation. She sees her son and blinks abruptly.

“Oh,” she says, “You’re still here.” “Yes,” he replies, “I am.” He furrows his brow at this.

The woman coughs, asks if he would like some toast. She holds out a plain round dish to him, with several slices of vaguely burnt bread atop it.

“Yes,” he says to her. “Thank you.” He takes one, puts the corner of it in his mouth, closes his jaw upon it. There is the conspicuous initial crunch of toast between teeth. There is uncertain chewing.

The young man and the woman sit in green gingham folding chairs on the floor of the basement. They quietly chew their toast. The woman delicately sips her tea. The noose swings.

 
 
 
   
   

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